Foundation to my building
Electric to my fixture
Facade to my fronting
You're more than that
Converter to my TV
Film to my picture
Director to my movie
You're more than that
Socks to my feet
Lace to my shoes
Heels under me
You’re more than that
Artery to my heart
Vein to my body
Explanation of every part
You're more than that
My don't to give up
My just to believe
My head to keep up
You’re more than that
You’re my forever
You’re my everything
You’re my mother
Well even more than that.
Beautiful! I haven't quite heard it put like that before. Mothers are the most precious of all commodities. I don't know how anybody could not cherish their mother. You are absolutely correct they are more than that! Never stop loving!
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I really like the third stanza. It's a great visual that stays consist from the first line to the last, all about feet and foundation which ties into the first stanza. Though I'm not sure if you meant to misspell Sock. On a different note, I'm not sure what images you're trying to convey in the second stanza as the visual goes from an object -converter to a person director? And I don't understand what the visual was suppose to be with film to picture. I do enjoy it as a whole though.
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